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Tuesday, November 8th 2005

6:35 AM

Did you hear the one ...

  • Mood: Not too good
  • Music: Not this morning.

About the writer who couldn’t make up her mind?

Here’s choice number two.  Remember, raw work here. When I’m working on story ideas or when a scene jumps into my head I just type, I don’t put in character descriptions or a lot of emotion unless it “appears” in my head.  When I’m done, then I go back and fix all of that, plus word repetition and the like.  So this one, like yesterday’s, is just the basis of a story.   I just need to figure out which one to work on – yesterday’s post or this one.  Tomorrow we’ll return to our regular scheduled programming.

 

Chapter One

 

“I’m not going.”  I can’t dance, don’t ask me.  Skye clicked yes in response to the computer prompt, balancing the phone between her left ear and shoulder.

“I don’t care if it’s a date with George Clooney.” Well, let me think about that. “What do you mean improper command?  I’ll show you improper command.  Not you, Jude, the computer.  Idiot machine.” 

“I’ll have you know that’s a state of the art piece of machinery.”   Jordan Sinclair walked out of his office and dropped some files on the desk.

“It’s a piece of crap.  Not you Jude.”

“If you weren’t so hard on it ...”

Skye reached up and patted the monitor.  “Oh pretty baby, you’re a sweet little thing aren’t you ... work you sucker!” The pat became a whack on the side of the screen.  Chuckling, Jordan picked up the mail from the in box and, resting a hip against the desk, began to slowly shuffle through the envelopes.

“Okay.  Here’s the deal.  You find me a mister gorgeous to go with, and maybe I might consider a trip to Hicksville.”

“Hello Jude.”

Jordan says hey.”  Skye gave a groan when Jordan began humming a familiar Beatles tune.  “Stop it!  Not you Jude.  Listen, I can’t work on this sorry excuse for a computer and have two freakin’ conversations at the same time.”  Skye nodded at Jordan when he raised a maroon and blue sheet of paper.  Rolling his eyes, he flicked the invitation into the trash can.

“Why would I want to go to the huff and puff bragfest?  Just to see who’s had a boob job, or whose hairline is enhanced by hair club for men?  I’d rather have a root canal with no anesthesia.” The computer let out a series of beeps before the screen went black.  “You sorry piece of .... NOT YOU JUDE!  We’ll talk about this later.  I think I just committed computercide.”  Hanging up the cell phone she dropped it in her purse and began tapping a finger on the desk, its staccato increasing with each passing second.  She looked up to see Jordan watching her.

“What did you do to my computer?”

“I didn’t do anything.  It committed suicide.”  By now, her finger had worked up to the theme from 60 Minutes.

“You always do that.”

“What?”  Frustrated, Skye blew at a piece of hair that had come loose from her tight bun, only to have it flop back inside her glasses.

“Tap your index finger when you’re agitated.”  Jordan flashed that irritating slow smile of his.

“I’m not agitated.  Not even close to agitated.  I’ve gone past agitated.  Between you, Jude and this damn computer, I’ve gone ballistic.  And now the Pink Lady is after me to go to this stupid reunion!  That’s the tenth time she’s called me since yesterday.”  Reaching down into the trash can she retrieved the discarded invitation and laid it on the desk.  “‘The forgettable class of too many years ago is getting together for a must-to-be-missed reunion.  The last wingding in the gothic revival behemoth before it’s retired to that great fossil graveyard in the sky.’”

“Don’t forget the town’s sesquicentennial.  Major doings in Satchel next month.  Anyway, the school wasn’t that bad of a place.  I have some fond memories.” Leaning over, he plucked the invitation from in front of her.

“You mean of the dark corners where you’d grope your latest nubile air-head?”

“They weren’t all air-heads.”

The theme from 2001: A Space Odyssey drifted from Skye’s purse.

“I think Hal’s calling.”

                Skye fished the phone from her purse and noting the caller, dropped it back the bag. “Jude.  Why can’t she take no for an answer?”

“I know the feeling.  This high school reunion thing is for the birds.  Venicia has called me three times this morning.”

Laughing, Skye swung around in her chair.  “Ah, the lost love of Satchel High.  How is good old Venie?”

Jordan stood up and dropped the mail back in its box.  “Far away, and that’s where she’ll stay.”

“Scared of a little girl, huh big guy?”

“Little girl, my ass.  So, I don’t want to be on the meat market.  What’s your excuse?”

“They think I’m a lesbian.”

“That was a long time ago.  No one thinks you’re a lesbian now.”

“Skye’s a lesbian?” a dark-haired man asked as he came through the office door.

Skye threw her hands up in disgust. “Don’t get me wrong.  I have nothing against lesbian’s, but I’m not one.”

“But you just said you were.” Ross Sinclair stood next to his brother.

“No I didn’t, Jordan did.”

Ross arched his eyebrows at his brother.  “When did Skye become a lesbian?”

“Fifteen minutes ago.  Me and Martha Washington’s been going at it for years.” Men, now she had two idiots to contend with.

“That I would like to see.” 

Skye gave Ross a pointed look.  “Pervert.”

“I’m not the lesbian who’s having a fling with a dead woman.”

Skye swiveled around, planted her elbows on the desk and buried her head in her hands.  “I’m not a lesbian.”

“I didn’t say she was a lesbian.  I said they think she’s a lesbian.”

“Who does?”

“They do.”

“Who?”

“I don’t know.”

“Third base.” Skye pushed back the chair and stood up.  “Satchel’s annual shindig slash sesquicentennial celebration.  The founding fathers and Satchel High elite are throwing this two weeklong boorfest to celebrate a dying town and a soon to be demolished gargantuan.   I don’t want to go because of those rumors that started in my senior year and chicken liver here is afraid of the big bad Venecia.  Caught up?”

“You mean the things Todd Bishop said?”

Skye looked at Jordan.  “He said the name.”

Shaking his head, Jordan put on his most disapproving face.  “You said the name bro.  I’m afraid that’s time out for you.  Go to your office and think about your shortcomings.”

“Son, the only shortcoming I have is you.  But I will go to my office because you two are lunatics.”  Turning, he walked into his office, firmly shutting the door behind him.

“Chicken liver?”

Skye circled the desk and began unplugging cables from the back of the computer.  “Help me with this.  I’ll take it home and see what I can do with it.”

“You’d better fix it.  If Molly returns tomorrow and finds out you’ve murdered Abby ...”

“She named the computer Abby?  And you think I’m weird?”

“Speaking of weird, heard from your brother lately?”

“Yeah, he called last night.  Maxie’s after him about this reunion stuff.”

Jordan pulled the CPU towards the edge of the desk and waited while she wrapped the cords.  “You call your mother Maxie?”

“That’s her name.  What do you want me to call her ... Fred?”

“It may sound a little old fashioned, but whatever happened to good ol’ mom?”

Skye snorted and dropped the cables into her bag.  “Maxie is anything but June Cleaver.  Besides, it’s not new age-ish enough.  I’m lucky I don’t have to call her Rainbow anymore.”

Jordan hefted the CPU and waited for her to pass and get the door.  “So it’s new age now.”

Skye paused and glanced up into hazel eyes that sparkled and always managed to make her stomach flutter.  “What else would a 60s hippie caught up in a time warp do?  Bring out a non-mainstream fad and old Maxie’s on the bandwagon.”  Walking out into the hall, she waited for him to clear the threshold before closing the office door.  “RJ Investigations” gleamed from the newly installed doorplate.  “Family won’t let you use Sinclair?” 

Jordan turned and looked at the company name.  “Yep, Pop said if we were going to fail not to drag his good name into it.  Are you going to get the elevator or is my holding this tower some sort of karmic payback?”

Skye moved to the bank of elevators.  “Nuhuh, Maxie’s into the karma stuff, I just like to see your muscles bulge and tremble.  Why is Ross’s initial first?”

“Because JR was too close to a smarmy TV individual that wouldn’t instill the greatest trust in the company, brainy girl.”

Pushing the down button, Skye waited for the doors to open.  “Sheesh, you haven’t called me that since seventh grade.”  Her cell phone began to ring as the doors swooshed open.  Pulling the phone from her bag, she flipped it open as she stepped onto the elevator.  Jordan followed closely behind her.  “What!”  Pressing the button for the first floor, Skye settled against the back of the car.  “Great idea Jude, but where am I supposed to find Prince Charming?  Rent a hunk?”  Jordan bent his leg and planted his foot against the wall of the elevator, propping the CPU on his knee.  Raising his eyebrows he mouthed Jude’s name.  Skye nodded and switched ears, eyes now watching the numbers descend above the doors.  “Yeah, that’ll work.  I’ll just walk up to the next guy I see and say ‘hey gorgeous, wanna go to Hicksville and help prove I’m not a lesbian’?  Forget it.  Besides, it has to be someone I know, someone who’s already knee deep in homecoming denial who’s just desperate enough to play pretend Ken to my Barbie, and the only one that comes to mind is Morris Nechelbach and you can forget that.  Strike three, fluff piece.”  The numbers hit lobby.  “Gotta go.  And I’m changing my phone number so quit calling.”  Skye flipped the phone shut and dropped it into her bag.  The doors swished open and she stepped out, pausing when she noticed Jordan wasn’t following her.  Skye’s brow furrowed in puzzlement as she glanced back at him, still slouched against the wall.  He made her nervous, his arms crossed across the top of the computer tower, his eyes focused on her, hazel eyes speculative.  “What’s up Sherlock?”

“I don’t know about Ken, but I did have a GI Joe.  Would that do?”

As Skye stood looking at him, blue eyes wide with dismay, the elevator doors closed.

 

17 total marks.

Posted by The Sister-in-Law:

Repeating from yesterday, I don't think it's fair to make me comment, but here goes: I like the energy in this one. Yes I know it needs work, but I like the quick-fire reparte between Skye & Jordan. Reminds me of Han & Leah in the 2nd Star Wars (Empire Strikes Back),
However, I refuse to choose. I know both stories & I like them both, so there.
Tuesday, November 8th 2005 @ 7:32 AM

Posted by Eve Mardis:

Tuesday, November 8th 2005 @ 7:56 AM

Posted by Joely:

This one's got some great dialogue going, but I think I still like Eden better. This one has some great possibilities though!!! :)
Tuesday, November 8th 2005 @ 8:15 AM

Posted by Eve Mardis:

Thanks Joely - that's two votes for Eden and one for Untitled.
Tuesday, November 8th 2005 @ 8:30 AM

Posted by Scott:

I didn't read the other one yet, but I thought the dialog was so alive. The whole 'whose a lesbian' thing was so funny, and I could picture the faces of the participants. Good descriptions.
Tuesday, November 8th 2005 @ 1:44 PM

Posted by Toni Anderson:

I like this one best--but got confused between Jordan and Jude (names). Then I'm an idiot, remember ;)
Tuesday, November 8th 2005 @ 2:02 PM

Posted by Susie:

There's a familiarness to this one...hmmm
I'm not having much luck making a choice. I can see why you would be having difficulty choosing one to work on. But if I must choose...
Tuesday, November 8th 2005 @ 4:03 PM

Posted by Susie:

Eden
Tuesday, November 8th 2005 @ 4:09 PM

Posted by Eve Mardis:

Thank you Scott!
Toni - you're not an idiot - your anonymous!
Suzie - well, that's actually 3 votes for Eden and one for Untitled so far. And yes, that's exactly why I'm having a hard time deciding.
Tuesday, November 8th 2005 @ 4:14 PM

Posted by glenice:

hm...I agree with Toni...took me a few lines to realize that Jude and Jordan were different and I could not figure out how you got a nickname of Jude out of Jordan! DUH!!!!

Anyway, I do really love the Dialog in this one...I like the lesbian thing too :)
Wednesday, November 9th 2005 @ 6:36 PM

Posted by Eve Mardis:

Yeah, I know, that's one of the things I would work on if this were picked - like I said, it's free thinking typing. But you still didn't say which one?
Wednesday, November 9th 2005 @ 6:45 PM

Posted by Glenice (Nampa ID):

OH BOY! SIGH!!! What a hard decision to make...but I think I vote for this one...but I still want to read the book Operation Eden...which I love too!

But I really like the feel of this one...

OK are you happy now :) :)
Wednesday, November 9th 2005 @ 8:58 PM

Posted by Eve Mardis:

Yeah - that breaks the tie. Untitled it is.
Wednesday, November 9th 2005 @ 9:04 PM

Posted by Olga:

Sorry I'm late, but I like this one better. It has energy, originality, fun language. Though I was lost in the beginning, too, between Jude and Jordan, to be honest. Really love the dialogue, though!
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